Sleep Like a Baby

Can someone help me change some of my poem, and see if it’s good?

the smiles on kid faces,
Laughing,
canoes drifting,
smoking flames of the cookout,
twinkling bright star shinninh in the sky,
the snores of our roommates sounding like a soft kitten puring,
the exictment of camp elphinstone
HELP ME ..PLEASE (CHANGE IT.

Besides changing grammatical errors, I would add some more details about the canoes, cookout, stars, etc. Elaborate a bit.

follow the snoring

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